I really enjoyed your elevator pitch. You did a great job of thoroughly describing the issue and the solution. I like how you went into very specific detail on the solution by describing the variations of water bottles you're going to offer. You also addressed the previous reservation of whether the water bottle would be comfortable to drink out of. Great job.
The only suggestions I have would be to use more meaningful hand gestures to get your point across, or just drop your hands by your sides if you're not using them.
Hello Jordan! You did a great job laying out the problem and following it up with the solution that your product provides. Your product is one many can relate to which allows you to attract customers more. I thought it was smart that your product comes in three sizes so there are multiple that consumers can pick from and maybe even buy more than one to have the different sizes. Great pitch!
I think you presented a memorable elevator pitch. You obviously had prepared as your presentation was concise and informative and you used body language well. I also like your explanation of the different sizes of bottles as I think it is a smart move with your product. Overall a very well put together elevator pitch and you have sold me on your product.
Hi Jordan,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your elevator pitch. You did a great job of thoroughly describing the issue and the solution. I like how you went into very specific detail on the solution by describing the variations of water bottles you're going to offer. You also addressed the previous reservation of whether the water bottle would be comfortable to drink out of. Great job.
The only suggestions I have would be to use more meaningful hand gestures to get your point across, or just drop your hands by your sides if you're not using them.
Thank you!
Holly Dixon
Hello Jordan! You did a great job laying out the problem and following it up with the solution that your product provides. Your product is one many can relate to which allows you to attract customers more. I thought it was smart that your product comes in three sizes so there are multiple that consumers can pick from and maybe even buy more than one to have the different sizes. Great pitch!
ReplyDeleteHi Jordan,
ReplyDeleteI think you presented a memorable elevator pitch. You obviously had prepared as your presentation was concise and informative and you used body language well. I also like your explanation of the different sizes of bottles as I think it is a smart move with your product. Overall a very well put together elevator pitch and you have sold me on your product.